Feedback - front cover draft 1

• Upper left corner of the magazine is a bit bare- Add either another cover line or an image.
• Make cover lines stand out more - Bolder text and brighter colours can be used to make text more eye catching
•  Main image- Haven’t mentioned who the character on the front page (include their name in a large type)
• Fill the spare spaces on the magazine so that it is less bare.

Contents Page outline. (Structure)

By creating this contents page outline, i am able to develop a more structured piece of work that is planned out properly. i chose this layout after having researched into the many other layouts used for contents pages. i decided that this gave the magazine an open look to it, instead of having everything crowded on one page. by using only one image, i can link all three articles of work together as the contents main image will include the Artist/Group that is featuring for the double page spread, as the front cover does.

Contents Pages